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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-19 03:30 PM



Still

you split the clouds
to where colors show
bend the rain
to bouqueted rainbow
strong bold color
tints your sighs
to be the dance
of my sunrise
every soft petal
gives me a thrill
each one whispers
he adores me
still

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-06-19 03:55 PM


This makes me think happy thoughts.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2002-06-19 04:16 PM


still indeed. . .

softly done helen. . .

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Goodknight
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3 posted 2002-06-19 04:19 PM


to be the dance
of my sunrise
Helen - I can't think of very many invitations that are more enchanting than this - thanks - Paul

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