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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-06-16 12:34 PM


There is simply no rhyme or reason
As to how I came to write
The words seem to flow so freely
Sometimes in the dead of night

I don't have a specific formula
Words flow like blood through a vein
I particularly like writing of romance
Sometimes of lovers going through pain

Why is it that I rhyme?
It seems to happen with such ease
I feel the more that I write
The more I am eager to please

I may write of fact or fiction
Sometimes it's difficuly for you to tell
But from all that I have written
I feel you know me very well

You've held my hand in grief
For me you have always been there
Your words have been so comforting
As you've shown how much you care

'tho there is much distance between us
I feel you're very close at heart
Your words to me speak volumes
And I don't feel so far apart

I look back over my writing
And I see how much I've grown
I've opened up my heart to you
So much of me has been shown

I hope you've enjoyed the journey
As you look through the window to my soul
Your words encourage and inspire me
And help me achieve many goals


Suetang

[This message has been edited by Suetang (06-16-2002 12:50 AM).]

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2002-06-16 12:38 PM


Sue, as you grow, we grow too in love for you. It's been a pleasure reading your work, watching you grow, sharing your thoughts, getting to know
Lynne

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-06-16 12:45 PM


Sue
I'm with Keth all the way. Your open heart and soul have come to us and we have enjoyed the honesty of your emotions.  Fortunately for all of us distance is not a problem anymore. We get to read your words and thoughts daily and I for one have to say it's been a pleasure!
Write on dear down under poet lady!
C'mon up to Canada and I'll take ya ski dooing that'll really create a culture shockwave through your poetry archives!

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2002-06-16 12:45 PM


Hello Lynne

I am truly humbled by what you wrote and I must say the feeling is mutual. I have made so many friendships through my love of the written word and life has never been better for me due to the support and love I feel here at PIP.  Thank you so much.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2002-06-16 12:48 PM


Hello Eric

An old Aussie sheila like me on a skidoo??  What a sight that would be to behold!! Canada is on the top of my list for places to travel to so you may get your wish yet.  Thank you for your warm and caring words which are so much appreciated.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2002-06-16 12:25 PM


Sue:  Thank you for inviting us along on your voyage of discovery into the realms of poetry!

Betty Lou Hebert

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6 posted 2002-06-16 12:56 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless you, sweet friend, you have one of the most loving and sensitive hearts I know and I know your dad jo matter what will always be with you and will be your inspiration behind many more lovely words to write! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

elfin_tigress
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since 2002-05-15
Posts 101
Someplace
7 posted 2002-06-16 02:49 PM



All that I could say about this has already been said.

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
8 posted 2002-06-16 06:43 PM


So very enjoyable, Sue...
and you do write excellent poetry.

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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