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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-07-15 03:00 PM


I am burnt
Look at how red I am
Oh man
Don't touch me

I look like a lobster
Where is the aloe?
I am in pain

I can't sit
I can't sleep
All I feel is that I am burnt

Cold hands means a warm heart

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kaile
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1 posted 2002-07-15 03:03 PM


while the feeling of hurt stings, i'm sure most of us will be willing to apply aloe(i learnt a new word today ) and some tender loving care on you

brace up! keep writing!

BloomingRose
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2 posted 2002-07-15 03:11 PM


Been there!

Deb

ThunderMage
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3 posted 2002-07-15 04:19 PM


I get a sunburn on Monday and by Wednesday it's turned into a tan. I must be strong against fire or something. LOL

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2002-07-15 04:27 PM


Whoa...your supposed to have someone rub suntan lotion on your back before you get burned...I see lots of burned one's over here down in Waikiki...I have found the best way to avoid burning is to keep rolling over...so I can see the women on this side and then that side and then back to the other side...I hate it when you get burned and the itching sets in...simply miserable...James
Madame Chipmunk
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5 posted 2002-07-15 09:23 PM


Sorry about the burn, Julie...
You look like you have very fair skin.
I have never gotten a sunburn because my ancestors wandered in the desert fo 40 years and I ended up with dark skin...
Aloe is the best though, it even works on kitchen burns.
~ healing hugs

Lyra

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"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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6 posted 2002-07-15 09:47 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, I'm sorry you got burnt, sweet friend, I know how you feel for it is so dry out here and I get burnt quite a lot too! (sigh) I do agree with Lyra, aloe vera works very well, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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