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Morcastlin
Member

since 2002-01-14

Posts 244
The Jersey Shore, USA

0 posted 2002-06-12 12:11 PM

Wants and needs beyond all reason
Thoughts and feelings intermingle
Hot or cold demands the season
As all senses thrum and tingle

Eyes, first wide, then closed in passions
A full-bodied sun is setting
Light submits to darker rations
Primal appetites are whetting

Lunge and plunge after the treasure
Pure lust hunting a fresh reward
Seeking, searching out the pleasure
O, put heart's conscience to the sword

Friend or foe, no longer waiting
For the kill or for the mating.

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2002-06-12 12:18 PM

You surely described the primal instinct very well

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

2 posted 2002-06-12 12:30 PM

Eyes, first wide, then closed in passions
A full-bodied sun is setting
Light submits to darker rations
Primal appetites are whetting

A beautiful raw feeling of sensuality in these lines, Bonnie...

I really loved the whole poem.

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-12 10:24 PM

Very well written.

2 thumps up.

Cold hands means a warm heart

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2002-06-12 11:36 PM

The drive is wide open! Well done. ThisDiamond

my3monkeytoes
Member

since 2002-05-11

Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze

5 posted 2002-06-27 01:11 PM

...for the kill, or for the mating...

Yep, that pretty much sums it up. I liked this!

~Sydney McLean

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-06-27 09:31 PM

(sigh) Wow, this is powerful, sweet friend, I too love the powerful passion you incoroporate into this, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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