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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sublime I have been missing you tonight can we take our time gently proceed so easily I don’t want to be without a precious moment sublime [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-07-2002 01:10 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady A lovely read, enjoyed. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
You're on a roll aren't you? I love the way you put these!!! Krishankins A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, Fourth line up from the bottom is missing the word "want"? Filled with desire and I love it.  Show you care to those you love...today. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
oops thaks larry....helen |
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