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John B
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 68
Texas, USA

0 posted 2002-07-02 06:25 PM

Killing is killing whether done for duty, profit, or fun

Awake but I’m not worth the sunshine
Asleep but I’m not worth the moon light
Dead but I’m not worth the demise
Alive but I’m not worth the height
I wake to smell the winter coming through the opened window
In the form of a cool breeze blow
I’m a stranger to myself and stranger to those
Who call themselves companions, only foes
Put me here in this bed
Applied these wounds to my head
Trying to repiece the events of my rise and fall
My friendship I guess wasn’t so good after all
My replies were only muted by their bats and fists
I realize all my friends are worth being missed
Then I get a good night kiss from a drop
Of the final blow to my head while they decided to stop
I tried to beat the pain but there was so many
Now I haven’t the luxury of pain or anything, any
Numb to the gestures greeting me at coffin
I wish someone would close the window its not hot in
Here just please let me rest where I lay in this bed
Did I mention in this home for the dead?
I think its time I go away
To hear the songs and play those needed to play
But I’m still here envying me
My white teeth, my face, my ego, my arrogance, see
The fake just doesn’t peer from my pores
It greets you all too great, all the more
All for nothing or all for them to see
And I’m nothing but something I shouldn’t be.

hi, this is my first time posting on the internet. thought i'd try it. bye.

[This message has been edited by Denise (01-12-2005 08:58 PM).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2002-07-02 06:38 PM

JohnB~
Welcome to Passions' circle of poets and friends~
I believe you will enjoy your stay~
Thanks for joining us~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Krissy
Senior Member

since 2002-02-22

Posts 556
kent England

2 posted 2002-07-02 06:38 PM

Welcome to Passions this is a very interesting write, full of deep meanings and deep thoughts. Hopefully this has be a catharsis and the pain you feel will ease from your soul. Take care

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-07-02 07:07 PM

BRAVO!!! Oh John, I'm so sorry you feel this way but I know you have come to the right place, for we share these feelings with you and this is a fabulous debut that I know will follow with many more lovely words, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet John, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (smiles) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, we all love you so much! Oooooohhhh...and please check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

                                                      Love,
                                                    Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-02-2002 07:11 PM).]

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-07-02 07:54 PM

Welcome to Passions John!
Very powerful first post.
Take a look around...I'm sure you will enjoy it here.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2002-07-02 08:14 PM

Welcome to our family. This is very dark in tone, I hope to read more from you (you may want to check out our Dark Passions Forum).

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2002-07-02 09:33 PM

Welcome! This is such a wonderful place and the poets are all loving and caring of each other. We're glad to have you and hope you will continue to post. Looking forward to more of you words. Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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