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Tearless Doll
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Tearless Doll |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA 
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 Tearless Doll white porcelain looks the soft hues of admiration glowed in her cheeks bright blue sky-eyes x-ray insight that stripped pretenders moveable, poseable , improbable she was all these things:jointed emotion but untouchable in a crescendo night of evil she was knocked to the floor an innocent bystander in an unrestrained home of violence her face cracked flawed or not, I loved her none the less she never said a word for all their pain never are they allowed to show it as she was just another tearless doll |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what beautiful eyes...you always move me with your words Jeff hugss M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Jeff! Loved every word. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeff my dearest friend Oh my stars how utterly utterly wonderful is this write of yours. Utterly utterly one of your utter best, the pace and the flow of this is utterly utterly superb. The images and the way you’ve drawn this show what a master craftsman you are. There is within this a sadness an ache of a soul that feels no one cares, and yet again you’ve painted the scene exquisitely. I love it darling boy as I always do your writing, you manage to describe perfectly the emotion with a superb flick of your pen. Excellent writing I love it utterly utterly. Ask Dulcie nicely to write some more poetry, I love her work to, but that doesn’t mean you can stop, your writing is outstandingly good Absolutely excellent I love it utterly Give Batman a hug from me and a kitty kiss   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've cracked the mold with this one... I exit with *swirling* emotion... ~D Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is an excellent emote. I have always loved the "porcelain doll/china doll" metaphor; it's not easy to write about since it's an overused and trite theme, but, you have made it new again. This one's a keeper. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Dulcinea Senior Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 774IN |
Such a powerful insight into the life and mind of an abused child, always sends a shiver down my spine...very well done sweetheart! |
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mable_sue Junior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 25Iowa |
Love the analogy. Makes me want to write about what it would be like if a human cld never express emotions. Thanks, and nice work. Liz |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Jeff hi there my dear friend, how excellent is this write of yours, the subject one which so many turn in disgust from and yet it still goes on. It is only by exposing the nasty and evil things that happen that we can change it. A wonderfully written and powerful piece from you I love the way you’ve written this and applaud your strength in doing so sensitively and yet with powerfully drawn images. In other words Jeff my friend I like this very much indeed. Kudos to you  Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Unfortunately, Jeff, the picture is gone, but darn if the words don't stand alone... You did good, Sir...very good... |
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