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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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when you cry I will dry your eyes lean on me if you need let my arms give you strength shadows fall in silent shapes the wind feels your name when you cry I will dry your eyes reach for me if you need let my heart give you hope ~~~~ ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-24-2002 01:30 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lauren, What a wonderful invitation. Friendship at its best.  It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
shadows fall in silent shapes the wind feels your name when you cry I will dry your eyes reach for me ===================== your whispers upon the wind will be someones invitation to sanctuary.  beautiful feather lite thoughts poetess L heart-hugs  Now for me some words come easy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely words...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ Everything you post has such a soft, delicate ring to it .... this is lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Lauren I felt so much love and saw so much beauty in your words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, and you know if you ever need someone to talk to, we are all here for you too, for that is what magic friendship can always offer! (kiss on cheek) You are a true angel of words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
softly you whisper your words upon our hearts...thank you dear friend for this treasure... Like a red brick, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - your words beautiful and caring, and shows a very warm heart... BC |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Excuse me ... there ... I just had to get something out of my eye. So little words, so much to say. But they are truly carried on a gentle wind. Beautiful!! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
A most lovely promise... something that I am sure you keep, very, very well |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
"when you cry I will dry your eyes lean on me if you need let my arms give you strength" - I really like the use of the italics, right up my alley...what a way to describe a much needed hug. "shadows fall in silent shapes the wind feels your name" - "shadows fall in silent shapes" that was my favorite line. "when you cry I will dry your eyes reach for me if you need let my heart give you hope" - so not only a much needed hug, but also genuine concern and feelings for another from deep within. This was most enjoyable to read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, As soft as a snow white dove, enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
Hope is found in the heart filled with love, That comforts and heals as do the angels above. And when hope is found in the heart this way, There is always healing, no matter what the day. You indeed have this inside of you, ignore it not, but make it your own. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Larry~ Yes indeed, thank you friend... ~~ Janet Marie~ the door is always open.... welcome any time, if needed....HUGSSS  ~~ JamesMichael~ thank you for stopping by.... I appreciate the smile you bring... ~~ Marge~ I am trying to keep the lighter side of me showing, thank you for your soft heartfelt reply..... HUGSSS~~ Sue~ thank you for feeling that, no greater smile than that of friendship....HUGSSS ~~ Noah~ I know, and what a wonderful shoulder I have found here among Passions... hugsss~~ Donna~ I thank you for al lthe friendship you have shown and given through the years... I treasure that dearly.... ~~ Bill~ you words never fail to make me smile.... or touch me in some way.....thank you.... ~~ Craig~ Big Ole bear HUGSSS thank you for your support always.... ~~ Decaflame~ a most precious response, kindly...I thank you ~~ Opeth~ softly, thanking you, for your much needed HUGS ~~ SY~ Thank you for stopping in.... I appreciate that much.... ~~ Vandana~ Appreciate your smile much.... Peace to all.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into an ocean of you, what if I told you, what if I said that I love you do we dare cross that line between your heart and mine~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-24-2002 12:57 PM).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
MR~ you snuck in on me...HI-- thank you for your poetic response....very touching of you....and very cherished.... hugssss...peace to you....Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I can hear music from this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lauren, so lovely, gentle and lyrical. Much enjoyed as always.... ~Hugs~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
wonderful once again. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Always nice to have a friend that cares..very tender and lovely Lauren hugs ~Victoria |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
always amazed at the soft depth of your work my friend. . . wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
*bump* back to the top where it belongs...*s* Like a red brick, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
*BUMP* |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thanks one and all.....Love to you all.... Lauren~ ~Sinking fast into |
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