navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » Your Smile
Open Poetry #20
Post A Reply Post New Topic Your Smile Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA

0 posted 2002-04-20 09:32 PM



Your Smile

Your memory will forever be
Embedded in my heart
Your sweet sunny grin
That always softly played
On your lips and in your eyes
The way you would take my hand
Always the trusting soul
You always brightened my day
From the moment I seen you
Until the end of the long day
You would make heart smile
With your laugh and the loving
Pat of your hand, wishing me well
I hope you have moved on
Knowing what difference
You made in people's lives
In my life.



In loving memory of Rhea Koons,
a resident where I used to work.



"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (04-20-2002 09:33 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
1 posted 2002-04-20 09:34 PM


rosepetals25 - may God bless your friend. My thoughts are with you...

BC

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-04-20 09:36 PM


Tara~This is so lovely and kind of you.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-04-20 09:40 PM


Yes smiles say a lot...when my girlfriend smiles it makes my day...James
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
4 posted 2002-04-20 09:45 PM


Sweet peace to those that shine so brightly on our lives. This was really beautiful.
ThisDiamond

Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
5 posted 2002-04-20 11:12 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know Rhea will never forget you or any of her friends and like always, her smile will always be worn upon her face as she watches over you and everyone with her love and grace! (kiss on cheek) You are an angel of words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, this made me cry! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
6 posted 2002-04-20 11:22 PM


Tara,
An excellent tribute and write. Well done. It's always nice to recall those memories.

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
7 posted 2002-04-20 11:26 PM


There are not many things you can do that
are more sincere and truly beautiful than
this Tara....

rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA
8 posted 2002-04-21 11:31 AM


Thank you everyone. You are all so nice.
RosePetal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985
South Florida
9 posted 2002-04-21 04:37 PM


what a loving tribute!  Tara, you are one in a million sweety
Greeneyes
Deputy Moderator 50 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
10 posted 2002-04-22 11:44 AM


Tara~

GREAT BIG HUGSSS sorry for the loss....Peace to you, a wonderful write!


Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
a ocean of you,
what if told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

NapalmsConstantlyConfused
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529

11 posted 2002-04-25 10:46 PM


i remember you used to tell me about Rhea all the time, honey, and i know you miss her. this is a beautiful tribute to a dear friend, and i'm sure wherever she is she appreciates it.
-Dave

Duncan
Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

12 posted 2002-04-25 11:31 PM


A kind and loving poem, Tara.
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
13 posted 2002-04-25 11:33 PM


beautifully said, Tara
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
14 posted 2002-04-26 12:49 PM


RosePetals~
Lovely dedicated thoughts from your heart~
*HUGS*
~Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
15 posted 2002-04-26 01:17 AM


This was such a beautiful and heartfelt dedication to someone very special.

Take care.......Sue

Suetang

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » Your Smile

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary