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To talk about you-inspired by Marsha's poem, "Fairy Tale Love"
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To talk about you-inspired by Marsha's poem, "Fairy Tale Love" |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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To talk about you - inspired by Marsha's poem, "Fairy Tale Love" Yes! I love you, dreamer of rainbow hue Cause when you come to me in ecstasy Just God above knows sweet magic we do In hot desire, white fire, boils ev'ry sea. Angels, singing birds trilling, filling air Breezes blowing, nature's knowing, it's you As your sweet name is spoken ev'rywhere And romance wets the planet in sweet dew. All big dragons dance oceans, breathing fire Oysters shed pearls and diamonds sparkle bright Magic of your spell roars over entire Universes make bright day from dark night. As I paint your skin with fairy dust, your. glows Show rainbows weeping to be as pretty As your radiance, all Creation knows No! It's not a fairy tale; or ditty A little glimpse of prec'ous you I pen I love you; and now let me start again. To talk about you. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Springs, Florida April 23, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (04-23-2002 01:03 PM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Newell darling boy this is utterly utterly brilliant. I really do love this delightful and picturesque poem, it really painted the picture, and something you excel at doing. Absolutely excellent writing. Very very creative and excellent language use. Well written darling boy. And to think my little scribble inspired it makes me incredibly humble. Thank you muchly Absolutely fabulous writing   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Your welcome, Marhsa.  ((Marsha)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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