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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2002-04-22 01:46 PM

2.2.02
Fortress of my secret thoughts
Oasis of my scattered dreams
Endless corridors to trap my screams
Twisting staircases to count my desires
A warm fire
Found within m'lords chamber
Burning embers
To warm my restless spirit
A chair to rest my wounded pride
A canopy bed to cradle my heart
Warm blankets to suffocate the pain
All found within my secret hideaway
My Camelot..

Krawdad
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since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2002-04-22 02:10 PM

Quite a refuge you have here!

I particularly like:

"Oasis of my scattered dreams
Endless corridors to trap my screams"

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2002-04-22 02:56 PM

do we all have a Camelot of our own??

perhaps. . . well done. . .

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-04-22 03:31 PM

Very nice...James

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-04-22 03:43 PM

Like this....Of course I always am a sucker
for a title like you have given this poem..

And I agree, I think we all have our own
little Camelot somewhere to regroup and
put things back together....

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-04-22 04:36 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may the prince of your dreams set foot into the Camelot of your heart and forever bring you true happiness! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2002-04-22 09:45 PM

Wow, I like your place, can I come visit sometime?
Sandra

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2002-04-22 10:14 PM

"Let it never be forgot
That once there was a spot,
For...one brief shining moment..
That was known as Camelot."

Of course these words from the song came to mind right away...
and I do believe we all create our own Camelot...I know I did!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2002-04-22 10:18 PM

I like this very much, Ceinwyn...

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

9 posted 2002-04-23 02:18 PM

Aww, a lovely piece Kristen.

Short, simple, but very deep. The expressions you use are lovely. Solitude! Solitude! None of us get enough of it, I feel. Well, some do, but, you understand me. Silience and solitude help us balance life, no? But... I'm thinking you don't neccessarily mean solitude.

"Found within m'lords chamber"

By this.. are you referring to love, me dear?

Sincerely,
Titus

The ultimate measure of a man is not where he stands in moments of comfort and convinience, but where he stands at times of challange and controversy.

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