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Mark Coburn
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0 posted 2002-04-21 02:49 PM



If I look.........
.........deep enough
a pale............
.........powder blue
ends the..........
.........extreme.....Mark Coburn

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1 posted 2002-04-21 04:04 PM






WOW!!! This seemed to me like some kind of search for new horizons and a stillness of heart, sweet friend, I like the colorful effect of this! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent!  You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-21 07:29 PM


hmm well I do like powder blue...
not quite sure where you were going with this but I will follow...

hello there *s

M

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3 posted 2002-04-21 10:05 PM


Feels smooth. What are you saying here?
Sandra

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4 posted 2002-04-21 10:08 PM


I have to agree with the girls....

smooth....But...what's happenin???

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5 posted 2002-04-21 10:22 PM


hey wiredOne

you're so smooth, they can't figure you out! LOL!!!!

*grin

still don't get the sowebo labor day memorial happening thingy and the difference between the two, btw...

but it is what it is what it is what it is

powder blue, the new day,
the way the sky plays tricks
with your eyes, the way a bird sighs
at dawn, the way the yawning brings peace
when the day is now gone.....

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thanks for the ear today via IM.. appreciate your concern.... i'm ok.. i think... who knows.... gunman got me... scared to death

.............

maureen.... heard you went out to Funks with the Professor and met the WiredOne..... too very cool!!

one day i'll get out there for a reading and all that jazz and hope to meet you ... maybe we can make a plan....

..............

geez... i'm rambling... my comment is way longer than mark's pome... forgive me ... it's late or early or something.. haven't slept in weeks

....ok... now about the Powder Blue poem... *grin... here's my take on it... GREAT writing, WiredOne... i dig it!

psssstttttt...... when they start telling you they don't understand you, just know it's been a mantra to me around here and i've not only learned to live with it, i got over it.... i figure deciphering is the basic meaning of poetry.... read it and weep.. let'em figure it out themselves... LOL

i do make myself laugh because i gotta

g'night

too much pinot grigio maybe? *sigh



Mark Coburn
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6 posted 2002-04-22 12:48 PM


Hey gang it's all about the yonder....doreen
someday you will read for Baltimore...being wired the waits killin' me.......

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