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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-04-19 10:02 AM


with his deft guidance
she followed his wicked lead
she knew the dance well

Inspired by:  Watchers


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (04-19-2002 10:03 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-04-19 10:09 AM




(sigh) This is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, your wonderful words always skip across these pages and inspire us with rhythms of tango! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is delightful! You have such a beautiful heart sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-04-19 10:15 AM


Ah yes. And wickedness does appear sweet...sort of like venus flytrap, yes?

Enjoyed this. It's nice to read you again, my friend.

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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2002-04-19 12:56 PM


Interloper~

I enjoyed the vision this brings....


Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion
4 posted 2002-04-19 05:20 PM


Whoa! In you come with a soft but noticeable flair. Where have you been? This was sweetness to read, and your inspiration for it was wonderful too.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Enchantress
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5 posted 2002-04-19 07:10 PM


...Dance me!...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Siofra
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State of Suspended Passion
6 posted 2002-04-20 12:45 PM



this is at the bottom already? its too sweet to be there.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

Larry C
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7 posted 2002-04-20 02:28 AM


Interloper,
It takes on to know one. Dang...if only I could dance!

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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The Shores of Alone
8 posted 2002-04-20 10:55 PM


Oh, I like this. It stirred up some nice thoughts.
Sandra

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9 posted 2002-04-20 11:52 PM


lovely thoughts this brings to mind
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10 posted 2002-04-22 12:38 PM


oh my, I think I saw that movie :O}

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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just out of reach
11 posted 2002-04-22 03:09 PM


Oooooh!! Dip me!! Please please?!! Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Lady In White
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12 posted 2002-04-22 03:19 PM



You have added mystery to her poem as well as insight to your own.  Well done, Sir.

Ivy Rose
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13 posted 2002-04-22 03:55 PM


You write in this genre expertly.  Loved the image of the dance.  ***Ivy Rose
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