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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Watchers he danced the tango around her words lifting her skirt with clicked up heel coming from nether reaches edging his way across her desire setting fires to all she had held close evacuating her mind tensing her senses curling queues he did not prowl nor utter growl but the bad in him dared her good opposites magnetized polar beginnings and with a lift of chin she accepted his grin and issued lifejackets to the watchers |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Man the lifeboats and hang on! There is a fire burning on the dance floor! Wow! I like this one... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, your fabulous expressions and cadence never ceases to amaze me! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true storm of inspiration! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Soleil darling girl, OH MY STARS this is without doubt one of your utter best it is utterly wonderful. This poem is absolutely perfect I love it, Truly excellent writing darling girl pace and rhythm spot on. YOU are an exceptional writer. I could hear the music and smell the passion. Excellent writing As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace Luke 2:79 |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I love this... great write ~~ Connie~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH MY GOODNESS!! I love this!!!!!!!! To think I almost missed this dance! Brilliantly written. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
but the bad in him dared her good hmmmm have known this to happen..so well written *s M |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
a deluge then. this bent me dizzy - in a good way. Peace, Chris |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quickly. . . to the floor!! well done my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can see these two but more her in her dance the clatter of her shoes on the floor after..when they are slow dancing so smooth ms deca |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
with his deft guidance she followed his wicked lead she knew the dance well Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
as Iambe tells me.. I still can't dance.. but I'll tell you I enjoyed this one... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Soleil Noir A witty from clever city. Enjoyed |
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