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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2002-04-23 12:25 PM

(from the notebook/reflection)

Echo's of my soul

--lost in you

I see your heart,

I feel the silence

--deep inside

I lay weeping

~~~~~

~Sinking fast into
a ocean of you,
what if told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-23-2002 12:32 AM).]

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-04-23 12:27 PM

Lauren,
So much emotion packed in to so few words...wow!

KimW
Member

since 2000-03-04

Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA

2 posted 2002-04-23 01:11 AM

I love compact, concise poems & this is definitely one of them!

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2002-04-23 02:43 AM

lovely, Green Eyed One

How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so.
~Sarah MacLachlan~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2002-04-23 08:21 AM

weep water wets
lover kiss places

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2002-04-23 08:45 AM

Lauren, you know how I love these!
Beautiful!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

6 posted 2002-04-23 09:09 AM

It is not the quantity of words spoken that speaks volumes, but much more is the quantity of the words spoken that do.

This was very good and very deep.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2002-04-23 09:56 AM

lovely words Lauren..nicely done hon ..hugs

~Victoria

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2002-04-23 10:04 AM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Lauren, I can feel sadness in these words, I hope everything is alright and now love has filled you with a blissful silence always! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beauitufl heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2002-04-23 11:50 AM

Soft and lovely. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2002-04-23 12:02 PM

A lot of sadness in these few words.
Nicely done.
Sandra

Moonlight Romeo

Senior Member

since 2001-09-10

Posts 982
The heart of you

11 posted 2002-04-23 01:01 PM

Love, then yet, loss. I wonder if the two are the same sometimes.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

12 posted 2002-04-23 02:55 PM

somy~

you are soooo beautiful, inside and out....HUGS

Theres a man in his own prison,
with a crime that nobody knows
he has sentenced himself to die
with no chance of pardon or parole..
he's lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (04-23-2002 02:57 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2002-04-23 03:24 PM

Greeneyes,
This tempest weighs heavy for its size. Excellent.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

14 posted 2002-04-23 04:04 PM

Lauren,

Your pen leaketh forth purest honey, sweet dew of the goddess in you.

Love tears - inspired by Greeneyes poem
"Love - 20 words or less"

Pure warm sweet tears of loving dew
swell fresh ambrosia waves
arousing sensual appetites
for hungry, thirsty eternal souls.

Love tears.

((Lauren))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

15 posted 2002-04-23 04:20 PM

you are so good at these 20 or less! You even inspired silver streak

Like the new pic dear!!

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

16 posted 2002-04-23 05:31 PM

Power packed yet with your special even flow.
Where have all those echoes gone??
Aching to be set free.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

17 posted 2002-04-23 07:00 PM

Good Evening all~

I am 'venting' right now...I assure you I am 'ok' with much faith....from my heart thank you...

Lauren~

~Sinking fast into
an ocean of you,
what if I told you,
what if I said
that I love you
do we dare cross
that line between your
heart and mine~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2002-04-23 08:14 PM

Greeneyes - as always, but tears in your eyes should never be...

BC

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

19 posted 2002-04-23 08:31 PM

Excellently done Lauren....soft and so very
loving....BTW....really like the new Pic!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

20 posted 2002-04-23 09:20 PM

lots of punch in less the 20..enjoyed!

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