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Kevin
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0 posted 2002-04-16 01:40 AM


I’m scared to sleep
Dreams are truth
I watch the clock
It refuses to stop
1:32
1:33
I’m scared to sleep
Tomorrow I will face fears
But for now
I am awake
1:34
What good are you TV
Dwelling thoughts don’t have commercials
I’m scared to sleep
I wish someone would call
Its nice to catch up with happiness
Times were good then
I slept well
I am scared to sleep
1:36
The sox won today
I’m unusually indifferent
Something needs to change
I’m scared to sleep
1:37
When will this end
I’m scared to sleep


© Copyright 2002 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-04-16 01:43 AM


well don't just sit there and wish someone would call! Call someone!

I do know what you mean though Kev, I've been there too, many times. Usually a nice cool glass of wine works to relax and turn off the mind for a while...

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-04-16 02:47 AM


I love this.

I love the logging of internal thought. For anyone who has ever been there, it adds to the intensity.

and hey, I'm scared to sleep too.

That's why I'm still up.

Great job with this!

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-04-16 02:54 AM


Kevin~
Hi there cutie pie~
It's nice for us that you aren't sleeping, but penning intense poetry to share~

I reach out with a soft lullaby to soothe you into slumber~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-04-16 03:34 AM


Quite there.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-04-16 05:48 AM


Hope good things happen for you...do your part and trust for the rest...get some sleep because some parts of a situation are out of your control...James
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