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From Midnight Blue to Dreaming............#10 (Half an archive back)
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From Midnight Blue to Dreaming............#10 (Half an archive back) |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration 
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©2000 Christopher Ward a peace of picture sways gracefully – hanged carelessly atop the nail, sliding along the remnants of a broken wall. when these simple words turn into breath with whispered ‘sssk’s’ of the gentle caress… pendulumatically swinging… swinging, it slows, slows, then stops for a silence. and now she wants to frame my mind in arms it rests here among the spectres of ambulation, casted on canted edges, not… quite… straight. the canvas, frayed, is time-worn fadings. yet I still become beauty on her tongue cracked, pitted, the paint a navy smear of potentiality – the promise of a then. she aches to taste the sighting of reality depictions of another time, paths of glories blurred… invisibling more each moment which passes, passes, passes unnoticed. time is bane when words lie still, unpeaced the moon rises with the ghosts of movement, perhaps a sigh entombed within the breeze, so the portrait stirs, and warmth returns to the motioned swaying, swaying, swaying… she wakes to sleep my dreamless night |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
My goodness Kissy Face....I love this one. "pendulumatically swinging… swinging, it slows, slows, then stops for a silence. and now she wants to frame my mind in arms it rests here among the spectres of ambulation, casted on canted edges, not… quite… straight. the canvas, frayed, is time-worn fadings. yet I still become beauty on her tongue" there is more, (like the whole poem) but this part I think I like best. damn you write awesome  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Christopher a poem that is a site for sore eyes yuh yuh |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Christopher...Glad this came out of the archives; because it would have been a shame not to read this marvelous piece of writing. ***Ivy Rose |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey you! You trying to get my attention? You KNOW I adore this one... Should I bore you by telling you how wonderful you are?  Grinning here, you, my friend, are one of those writers that I learn from, just by reading you. Smooches. Great to see you, sweet face! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Susanopher - Thank you kind lady. Your words and appreciation make it worth having been resurrected. Walt - Danke. Glad you recognized it! Ivy Rose - Wouldn't miss what you hadn't seen! Thank you.Karen - glad to see you're back and running (hopefully not away!) and please, bore me!!! HUGSC Some people are born smart. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
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~soft smile~ I remember this..I loved it then, love it still..it was one of your ethereal works..graceful, delicate...and it still has so much truth... reading this and comparing it to your recent writes, I can see your growth... it was a pleasure to read it again hugs you  K |
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