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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-04-14 09:18 PM


Breathless

Breathless
as you aproach
feeling young
unsure what to
say
no words needed
our eyes say
it all
electrified
as our finger tips
touch
cheeks meet
to greet
over powered
by emotion
lips devour
breathless


Connie McDonald
Copyright@2002


© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-04-14 09:41 PM


Sleek and spellbound. ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2002-04-14 09:42 PM


Ooooh wonderful Connie...
Great images and feelings with this.
Enjoyed.  ~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-04-14 10:00 PM




(smiles) YAY!!! May the beauty of true love always fill your heart and leave you breathless in rapture and joy, sweet friend, this piece is breathtaking as all your gorgeous words are! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-04-14 10:30 PM


Zinsser~
I really enjoyed this one~
You're penning some creative-thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
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5 posted 2002-04-15 11:35 AM


Thanks everyone very much....
I have been working my bum off  LOL and it just felt good to write something...
~~ Connie~~

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