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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-04-14 06:10 PM


No One Else

I want to be
her lover forever
and no one else.
I want to discover
the thrill of
loving each other
with her and
no one else.
I want to spend my
whole life together
with her and
no one else.
I will make every
effort to be the man
she wants me to be
for there is no one
in this world more
important to me
and no place else
I would rather be
than with her
and no one else.

JamesLee
April14
2002


© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
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just out of reach
1 posted 2002-04-14 06:23 PM


Well now..she sure is one lucky lady. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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2 posted 2002-04-14 06:45 PM




(smiles) This is so lovely, sweet friend, and I wish you and your love to be together forever and find all your heart desires with her alone! (big hugggsssss) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-04-14 07:05 PM


Sounds like a beautiful commitment JM...
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4 posted 2002-04-14 07:29 PM


"I will make every
effort to be the man
she wants me to be"

Aww I can see how dedicated you are to her.
I wish you lots of luck my friend, just please don't alter yourself totally for someone else. (hugs)

Ivy Rose
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5 posted 2002-04-14 09:42 PM


JamesMichael...Very emotionally power-packed piece.  She will love it.  Your heart is committed to hers.  ***Ivy Rose
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6 posted 2002-04-14 09:44 PM


Wonderful James...
She sure is a lucky lady.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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7 posted 2002-04-14 10:11 PM


Nicely written, James.

((James))
-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

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8 posted 2002-04-14 10:26 PM


JamesMichael~
Absolutely beautiful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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with you
9 posted 2002-04-15 01:03 AM


"for there is no one
in this world more
important to me
and no place else
I would rather be
than with her"

*sigh*
how could she not love this? and you

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10 posted 2002-04-15 01:37 AM


SweetieJames, it's been a while that I've been reading your sweetpoetry and this particular one stands out among them all for the expression is one of true heart...
Hugz2u dearFriend4sharing this with us...
*~coco~*

Dulcinea
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11 posted 2002-04-15 12:50 PM


I really hate to use a tired old cliche here, but "Just DO It"! Show her she is the most important part of your life, show her that you want to be the only one for her, and her the only one for you...actions DO speak louder than words, and give substance to the faith we hope in. Well said James!
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