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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It’s distant yet The rumble if you listen Can be heard to roll In low feral growl across Tree lined horizon With a bass that panes In sympathy rattle with Lying here with you I can feel the vibrations Resonate in you as well While the windows reflect Distant lightening dances That break on the ceiling As if shards of liquid glass Squall lines move quickly This time of year Driven by cold fronts left From long winter nights That collide with warmer currents Of passing time with your distance yet to be determined [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (04-12-2002 03:42 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Somedays I find something on here that I just have to nod at...and try not to smile in recognition. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is when the tornado shelter comes in quite handy... meet you there...  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Lying here with you I can feel the vibrations Resonate in you as well While the windows reflect Distant lightening dances That break on the ceiling As if shards of liquid glass" love it....but i love a good storm...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Had this happen here early this morning.. Lightening was fantastic.... as were the vibrations.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! Cpat, my goodness! I love this one! anything about storms, I love... a wonderful ending also! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It's distant yet The rumble if you listen Can be heard to roll In low feral growl across Tree lined horizon With a bass that panes In sympathy rattle with Lying here with you I can feel the vibrations Resonate in you as well While the windows reflect Distant lightening dances That break on the ceiling As if shards of liquid glass =================================== had one of these this afternoon...first of many this spring and summer in St.Lou. your imagery is as impressive as the lightening was today...felt your words like the thunder. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! This one curses with lightning of inspiration, sweet friend, I love it, this is a true storm of eotions! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is superb! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have missed your quiet wisdom so much. This is gorgeous writing. Reads like a hug. I'll be in touch. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
with your distance yet to be determined Yes, those are nice lines Cpat~ Could almost hear the disturbing sound of thunder that rattles outside the window. |
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