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Open Poetry #20

When I Think About You

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-04-12 11:36 PM

There’s not a day I do not think
of sharing sunny sways
while running through the park to end
in passion’s sweet displays

Of candle sparking tamed romance
then sudden gust of wind
as on your lips you say, “all right
it doesn’t have to end”

My faith, the light, that still remains
is cut into your eyes,
our ears are focused on our souls
as doubting lovers cry

I touch you in this dream I have
and wish it would come true
is this the torment of my life
to ever think of you?

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2002-04-12 11:48 PM

Walt, this is really great! My favorite part:

Of candle sparking tamed romance
then sudden gust of wind
as on your lips you say, “all right
it doesn’t have to end”

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2002-04-13 12:23 PM

WOW~

Sometimes dreams can be that way, they leave us wondering if they ever will come true....wonderful this is...

Lauren~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows of my heart

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2002-04-13 09:03 AM

How romantic! I like this one Walt.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2002-04-13 12:42 PM

Wonders never cease, it's Walt writing the love stuff, and you do it so well.
Beautiful writing and expression~

Well I'll be~~~this is really something!!!

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