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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Reach By: Noah Eaton 2/6/02 When I wake up from a dream I embrace the sunlight I pray to the lord above To bring a sparkle to my eyes A true love I yearn to hold to my heart That I could nurture like a mother And never fall apart Because there is a hole Deep inside of me Finally I have found something That can make me complete So reach me, my love Have faith in me Reach me, my love I've tossed and turned in my sleep Can you reach me, darling? I'll take you to where the heavens sing Can you reach me, darling Where our hearts can no longer bleed I say my prayers Before I go to bed Wishing to hold you close forever And someday be wed When I cry I always think of you To reassure myself To keep myself from feeling blue I would sacrifice anything Just to hear you laugh You are my Guinevere You fill me with rapture at last So reach me, my love Have faith in me Reach me, my love I've tossed and turned in my sleep Can you reach me, darling? I'll take you to where the heavens sing Can you reach me, darling Where our hearts can no longer bleed Whenever you feel sad, reach me Just reach me Come on, just reach me Where our hearts can no longer bleed All this time these tears I cry They keep flowing, in all this time All this time I wonder why Can I make you mine? All this time I've heard you cry I just want to hold you and make everything alright I always feel bad when I see you cry I just wish that I could comfort you Kiss away your tears when everything seems wrong Hug you close and cry with you when you're feeling blue I just want to be your savior of your heart You say you hate yourself even when I love you I just want to make you the happiest girl in the world Just tell me how you feel, and I promise I'll do what I can to set you free Can you reach me, darling? I'll take you to where the heavens sing Can you reach me, darling Where our hearts can no longer bleed Can you reach me, darling To where the heavens sing Can you reach me, darling Before I fall into the ashes of broken dreams… [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (04-11-2002 11:17 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hi Noah, A love song torn...I found I read it softer as I neared the end. ThisDiamond |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Noah, my dear, I don't really know what to say, this is kind of sad and kind of hopeful too. You are just so emotional...and I like that in a man  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Noah, You are truly a special soul and I enjoyed reading this beauty, so full of emotions and caring, wonderful work. Love, Cerenity |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Noah~ you have a heart of pure gold, sadly written, almost to a haunting glow, but beautiful just the same... Lauren~ Step through the |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sweet thoughts here  |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Sad, but full of hope.Your emotions always pull me into your writes.Wonderfully done. Peaches |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
a song straith from the heart, and show your innermost feeling very well....you are a wonderful and warm person. ((((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Very sweet, Noah. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Noah, this is simply georgeous! Beautiful, sad, and touching also. Just keep reaching and it will all be worth it. Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Your words made my heart stop, I don't know why perhaps you mentioned that she was your Guinevere..I'm sure any girls fantasy, I know it's mine..it was sad though, Again another poem having me all friggen choked up!!! Your words remind me of someone and something..it's quite freaky in all honesty...*deja vu* Kristen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful !!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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