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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2002-05-09 10:38 PM



Words fail me
I have no way to describe
The way you make me tingle
Our connection, that vibe

Those reasons that are too many
Fill to overflowing, my heart
No way to explain
You simply are, the biggest part

It’s not a matter of loving you
It’s about how much
It’s not a matter of wanting
It’s in the needing, your touch


~SEA~



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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-05-09 10:44 PM


The spoken words of yearning and desire,
whispered so softly...beautifully...

Nice ...  very nice....

Thank You Sue..

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2 posted 2002-05-09 10:46 PM


Words will never fail you....especially beautiful ones
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3 posted 2002-05-09 10:47 PM



Indeed it is...well said, beautifully so.

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4 posted 2002-05-09 10:56 PM



Sometimes, when words fail
the eyes say it all...

I LIKE this!

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5 posted 2002-05-09 10:57 PM


It’s not a matter of loving you
It’s about how much
It’s not a matter of wanting
It’s in the needing, your touch

You got me with this one, Susan.  

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6 posted 2002-05-09 10:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may the love you feel always be so special and impossible to describe and fill you with everlasting enchantment and wonder! (kiss on cheek) This is a gorgeous dedication, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (05-09-2002 10:59 PM).]

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7 posted 2002-05-09 11:02 PM


This is beautiful, Sea. I like it very much.
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8 posted 2002-05-10 11:47 AM


They fail me, too.
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9 posted 2002-05-10 01:01 PM


You've spoken this well.  Nicely penned, my friend. (((hugs)))  

me

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10 posted 2002-05-10 02:06 PM



It’s not a matter of loving you
It’s about how much
It’s not a matter of wanting
It’s in the needing, your touch
you  said it well, SEA

*s
M

Alan
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11 posted 2002-05-11 07:31 PM


Sue....I have gotten to know these feelings very well here lately. I love this little piece.
alan

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2002-05-11 10:06 PM


Don't worry...you don't have to say or do it all in one day...there's plenty of time for love...James
Logan
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13 posted 2002-05-12 02:12 AM


Sigh, SEA, there you go again, weaving in a few words a romance that takes hold. Beautiful job...very gentle smile..
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14 posted 2002-05-12 02:22 AM


Certainly you must know your words never fail SEAgal~ It's a matter of how you state them so simply!  Happy Mom's day to you!
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