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The weight of your words
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The weight of your words |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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What can I say to the weight of your words? So cold and pretty. Like a dry face in the sea. So angry. Like I used to be. What can I say to me? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whoa.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonder that you're not like that any more. . . thought-provoking. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Loved this title It pulled me into a double twist Your mind is like Martie's. (Nobody else thinks that way) but it makes for interesting poetry Liz |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Glad you all liked my verse. And I'm glad to be compared to Martie! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sometimes there are no words. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Dang!!... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Heh heh. Thanks. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
speaking of genius. The gravity of the situation was no guessing game here. Loved it, Mike! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Danke, S'en. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 WOW!!! I love the gravity effect of your emotions in this, sweet friend, it shows the eloquence of your thoughts and how in contradition it can tremble like a earthquake between there and here! (big huggssssss) I enjoy this immensely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Whoa is right! Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What can I say to me? adding to the above whoa's....powerful impact. Like a red brick, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
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