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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-05-03 02:40 AM


Fascinated by my world?
Watch my grace.
meandering


Movement.
fluid
Silence sings.


Watch my grace.
meandering

*     *     *



Okay...what am I?


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Larry C
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1 posted 2002-05-03 04:24 AM


Clueless...

It's never too late to have a good childhood! Woohoo!

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2 posted 2002-05-03 07:15 AM


Please Larry she is not clueless..LOL (I know you meant YOU were)

Ok...so you have the letter 'A'...hmmmm...

alcohol is fluid but I'm not sure it meanders.

ants meander but I'm not sure they're fluid.

Hmmm....

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3 posted 2002-05-03 08:20 AM


Watch my grace.
  
RHYME!!


fluid

RHYME WATER!!!
(send vials)   rofl


heh


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4 posted 2002-05-03 08:26 AM


Ok... I just saw Sharons reply...
so it has to start with the letter A?


I hadnt seen the challenge...just went and checked it out.....
so at least I know what I am supposed to be guessing  


Ok....

"Movement.
fluid
Silence sings.



AIR????

[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (05-03-2002 08:27 AM).]

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5 posted 2002-05-03 09:38 AM


well if I was naughty
and you were walking by
I might notice the sway

of how the wine in the glass
seems to have the same rhythm

now what starts with A

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-05-03 01:09 PM


laughing here at DS...um, I think the category is COMMON objects--if I'm following you--what I'm thinking of ain't so common!

And what am I??? Apparently I am too vague...sigh, I have failed!

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7 posted 2002-05-03 04:42 PM


amazing. . . yes. . . amazing. . .

this is exactly the kind of thing that I was going for. . . to see the object cast in this way is perfect. . .

now then, if you'll all just think about what serenity has put here. . . and use the letter "a", it will become quite clear to you all. . .

wonderful my friend. . . just perfect. . .

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8 posted 2002-05-03 05:19 PM


Of course!

An avocado!


(fascinated with yr world nothin', i'll be fascinated if I spelled that right!)

Love the meandering bit.

I stumped (my toe).

...hmm ... you want a serious guess?

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9 posted 2002-05-03 05:23 PM


Antelope? Airplane? No no no...

I'll get back to this (unless the weekend happens first)...

hmm...

You're good!

The alphabet?

nah.

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (05-03-2002 05:24 PM).]

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10 posted 2002-05-03 05:47 PM


A-1 suggestions!   Clever Celeste!
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11 posted 2002-05-03 05:52 PM


gee this one is tough...

how about ash..volcanic ash

or maybe an asp
I will continue to guess though *s

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2002-05-03 06:08 PM



ABRACADABRA

Abseil????
it has grace, movement, silence and fluid (I would sweat out of my pants doing that )and it's meandering (when things go wrong).

No?

A snake?

Nahh, it's supposed to be a common object.

Poet deVine, how did you know it was an A??

I'm lacking of English A-words here

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I

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13 posted 2002-05-03 06:10 PM


The A was in her request in the Challenge Forum...
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14 posted 2002-05-03 07:10 PM


An arabesque?

*Nancy exists determined to figure this one out!*

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15 posted 2002-05-03 07:18 PM


Thinking an ant trail here.
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16 posted 2002-05-03 07:24 PM


But it's an object  right? something you can pick up  or a noun or a thing.....and it's supposed to be common..so is a trail an object? I am beginning to rationalize way too much here.
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17 posted 2002-05-03 07:37 PM


Hmmmm..gosh..how about an aquarium? Just throwing in a guess. hugs!

Reg

Titia Geertman
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18 posted 2002-05-03 07:48 PM



You could be right there Rwood, that's a pretty common object and it has all the elements in it.

WOW, Serenity where are you??? I'm curious.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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19 posted 2002-05-03 08:05 PM


REGINA!!!!! You are so smart! You win the golden quill!!!! Hugs to ya, I'd given up, and figured I either had to write a more obvious one, or just post pics of fish or something...sigh. Thank you m'friend, and to everyone for taking the time. Love to all! fishy kisses to you!
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20 posted 2002-05-03 08:05 PM


You're right! It has to be an aquarium. S'en's a poetic genius!
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21 posted 2002-05-03 08:12 PM


laughing, Mike? flattery will get ya everywhere! and I wanted to slant the italics right, then left, to right again, to mimic a fish swimming...but I am computer challenged...so I had to make do! Thank you Mike, you are absolutely cracking me up these days!
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22 posted 2002-05-03 08:37 PM




WOW!!! This is the first time I've read this, and I'm so glad I didn't miss you, I actually was going to see a coral reef but that was right along the line of Regina's correct answer! YAY!!! (kiss on cheek) This is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, nice challenge, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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23 posted 2002-05-03 09:00 PM


Sure, I'm cracking you up here. But if you ***Shameless Plug FOLLOWS*** head over to the adult forum, I can also melt you down.

Ooo. Ah. Pretty colors.

I'm out. Happy weekend, all.

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