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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-05-02 06:00 AM



I hear the thunder
this morning
as it wakes me
to another day
of wonder tears
needed, the drinking of,
a must to grow
and reach potential.

M

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2002-05-02 06:31 AM


Wynter~

'wonder tears'

Love the very 'potential' of that thought~
*Hugs* gal~
~*Marge*~

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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-05-02 06:47 AM


It's pouring here this morning, needed rain
but with the potential this afternoon of deadly tornadoes and high winds in an area where we hardly see them...so the anticipation will worry all...

thanks Marge *s
M

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2002-05-02 07:02 AM


I predict a gentle rain to soak the springtime earth. And potential for a beautiful garden of memories.
No tornados today
I ditto Marges interpretation of "potential"
Very nice
Liz

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4 posted 2002-05-02 07:05 AM


Maureen darling girl. YOU are a superb writer my friend, the flow and structure of this is wonderful. Fabulous writing and the language usage in it is stunning, a deep and meaningful piece with much to ponder in the soul

Absolutely excellent


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

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HopeS
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5 posted 2002-05-02 09:23 AM


Way across the other side of the world Maureen and we are having thunderstorms too , we do desperately need rain

I loved the way you expressed this with all the waiting and anticipation
Hope

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2002-05-02 10:54 AM


I hope you are correct Liz..I think you may also live in its path...since we  both live in PA...
Yes I meant it to also mean a growth  in spring...thank you Liz


Marsha... good morning *s I hope this day brings you light and happuness and thank you for your friendship
hugss
M

Hope, well that is something..having thunderstorms on  both sides of the world...and  both needing rain. Nice to see you Hope
thanks
M

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7 posted 2002-05-02 01:57 PM


Can I have some of that rain? I'm thirsty today. (ooo, poem idea) Thanks!
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2002-05-02 03:14 PM


always a pleasure to give an idea to another poet *s...

M

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9 posted 2002-05-02 07:25 PM


enjoy your read
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10 posted 2002-05-02 07:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Maureen, I know how you feel, it has been a desert here so long and I yearn for the rain to fall and end this drought that is the worst once since 1951! (sigh) This is a very powerfully emotional poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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11 posted 2002-05-02 09:47 PM



...and you are safe...
and left wondering...

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