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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-02-27 04:17 PM



The night spreads to a blanket
of stars and moonlight.

We lie on our backs in devotion
to the sky.

All is quiet in this temple.

Opening your hands...you reach
into the night -
as if to call forth something greater
than ourselves.

And the grace of this simple
gesture -
punctuates a silence
deeper than we both can know.

And into this void...we cast our
prayers.




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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-27 04:22 PM


I just love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Etain
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The moon...
2 posted 2003-02-27 04:52 PM


Magical moments are those we can call holy,
and lovers know where that temple of holy moments is,
you know too.
I love this!

Love,
Etain.

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3 posted 2003-02-27 05:28 PM


Ericc~
Write the stars and you capture my attention~

'the grace of this simple
gesture -
punctuates a silence
deeper than we both can know'


Remarkably beautiful thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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4 posted 2003-02-27 05:31 PM


yes..you captured a moment...and got my attention as well..

enjoyed this.... nice work...

Margherita
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5 posted 2003-02-27 06:54 PM


.... pure magic ...."in devotion to the sky", you create a beautiful atmosphere.
Very very enjoyable.
Love, Margherita

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6 posted 2003-02-27 07:01 PM


Enchanting...simply beautiful!!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

cinnamongirl
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7 posted 2003-02-27 07:03 PM


Sweet, magical, ethereal, beautiful... how gentle and profound.

Thank you for such a divine whisper... truly divine.

Love,
Moca

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8 posted 2003-02-27 07:47 PM




(smiles) Oh Eric, this is beautiful, sweet friend, may all your prayers and wishes come true and may the stars you wish upon merge together into a supernova that never explodes, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-02-28 04:43 AM


excellent!
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10 posted 2003-02-28 09:40 AM


heavenly!!!!!
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