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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-02-27 07:56 AM

Dirty shadowed alleyways
Where the light seldom touches
Dwell the fractured minds of day,
With dreams for sutures.
Grime smeared walls preferred to white
Beams of voltage screams
Searing fantasies with the light,
As they carry you
To sleepless plastic places
Binding all moving
With their smiling masked faces,
Always clean sheets
But nothing for the numb cold
Questions getting pain
So you exist in a fold,
With speechless seeing
In blurs of misplaced glasses,
But in this being,
Desire for glances passes;
All is just the same
Cleaned with precision movements
Well-Trained workers
Gallons of disinfectant,
And lack of caring.
But they are no longer mine,
I have left them now,
Preferring the walls of grime
Alleys of trash piles
And unconcerned sad faces
Clean memories
Fresh vision from old places.

Gloom

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

1 posted 2003-02-27 10:11 AM

Professor,

!!! Oh, my....!!!

I can come up with several different meanings/scenarios.

This is almost stunning...no, it is stunning, (for this mind) My chin on my chest, this is one to read over many times.

I liked, among many lines:

"With dreams for sutures"

Interesting read, thank you, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-02-27 10:16 AM

Yes, Prof, it was interesting...

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Hugs,
Ethel

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-02-27 01:30 PM

Yes this is very interesting!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-02-27 01:36 PM

Professor,
Spring cleanning, winter isn't over yet, enjoyed.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-02-27 03:32 PM

sometimes memories are better left where they lie...

almost as dark as me today

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-02-28 04:55 AM

I'm there with ya

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2003-02-28 09:47 AM

Thank you, regards2you,
Pleased you enjoyed and that it has some readability

Thank you, Garysgirl & Brad Majors,
Glad to hold your interest for the moment

Thank you, Seymour,
My years are as winter,

Thank you, Nakdthoughts,
Pleased to see your response,
I tend to poke at old memories pull at old scars,
But all tendencies are to the darkness of gloom

Thank you, passing shadows,
Your comments are a pleasure

Gloom

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