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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-02-15 10:46 PM

The course of you
through veins
pools upon the floor
drawn by bladed words
laced with contempt
and forged of familiarity
thrust masterfully
into the heart of me

Defeated

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-15 10:52 PM

yes I like this poem. Full of deep feeling

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-02-15 11:07 PM

Aenimal
Touche, enjoyed.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2003-02-15 11:49 PM

I think you have a masterful skill....

I sing to life
To it's tragic beauty
To pain and strife
Let all that dances through me
The rise and the fall, I lived through it all

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-02-16 12:14 PM

thanks loner

Bard Seymour, your comments are always greatly appreciated

Greeneyes I'm touched, thank you for the kind words

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-02-16 08:03 AM

dont u just love family gatherings?

abbe
Member

since 2003-01-20

Posts 131
michigan, usa

6 posted 2003-02-16 08:44 AM

words - the cruelest weapon we weild - and sometimes the damage cannot be undone.

defeated?

no the wounds heal - but the scars... marked forever.

damn - this is good... as your words always are.

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

7 posted 2003-02-16 11:17 AM

As usual,very good.right up my alley.
Jason

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-02-16 11:23 AM

My mind read "coarse" which still works well...

Good read, Raph...

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-02-16 02:07 PM

Mish..uh...no

Abbe not completely defeated no, lose the battle win the war?

Jason thanks glad you like em dark

Sunshine it seems both apply yes

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-02-20 04:54 AM

sigh

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

11 posted 2003-02-20 05:31 AM

ouch! those are some painful blades... no wonder so many won't let anyone near their heart... bleeding isn't what I'd call a great day.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-02-20 08:50 AM

Dixie no sighs, smile somebody should

Alyssa thanks for the reply and no not very fun

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