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Dragon Mistress
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0 posted 2003-02-26 06:34 PM


~I wrote this, of course, thinking about my hubby and I...but is it a little too much?Too, oh I don't know, mushy?
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I dream of the day we'll be together
The day we'll say "I do"
I dream of the day we'll live together
In a small house for two

I dream of the day we'll move away
To a small house for three
I dream of the day that he will come
Our first born will come to be

I dream of the day we'll watch him walk
Walk from the stage, diploma at hand
I dream of the day we'll watch him grow
To make his own promise land

I dream of the day we're alone
Our children grown and gone
I dream of the day we can rest
The day all we need to do is done

Oh, I even dream of the day we've had enough
And wish to say "good-bye"
I dream of the day that we'll reflect
On all the time that's gone by

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

© Copyright 2003 Tanya Weakley - All Rights Reserved
Albert J. Allie
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1 posted 2003-02-26 08:13 PM


I dream that dream.
Wondering if she will ever be,
She of whom I write of
In my poetry...

Dragon misstress (love the name DRAGON)you amaze me with your writing!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-26 08:37 PM




(sigh) Oh Tanya, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too dream for all these special times with my future love wherever she is as I think all of us long for! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Thomas119gold
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3 posted 2003-02-27 10:31 AM


Mushy NO
beautiful YES
Dreams are what we live for each day
So I say dream away

Thomas
aka: Rogue

Brad Majors
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4 posted 2003-02-27 10:34 AM


since when is mushy bad?
Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-02-27 11:18 AM


Dragon Mistress
You dreamt of a lifetime. LOL enjoyed.

INclan
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6 posted 2003-02-27 04:48 PM


FOLLOW YOUR DREAMS!

INclan

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-02-28 04:58 AM


this kind of mushy is good, I think
SmartChick
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8 posted 2003-02-28 08:21 AM


Those are good dreams to have.
JamesMichael
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9 posted 2003-03-01 04:32 PM


Enjoyed...James
Kethry
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10 posted 2003-03-01 04:58 PM


Dragon Mistress,
to dream is to dare and to dare is to do. Not mushy at all but beautiful dreaming.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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