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Open Poetry #25

Raw Material

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-25 10:27 PM

Raw Material

you fold me
on contact
crisp tight lines
this content
inked dark
as written
on tissue
letter kissed
to linen
roll of lips
change words
to wings
and there
I go
from paper
to pulp

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-25 10:31 PM

This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Minister Joe
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 78
TX, USA

2 posted 2003-02-25 11:23 PM

Helen,

as written
on tissue
letter kissed
to linen

A wonderful feeling of transference here. Bittersweet--but strongly motivated by strong feelings.

Thank you,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

3 posted 2003-02-26 02:46 AM

sensual as ever. nice.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-02-26 02:47 AM

don't it always work that way? good write!

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