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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-02-19 09:26 PM

It couldn't be the way your scent
Playfully tickles my nose.
Or the way your eyes search mine
Gentle as the petal of a rose.

It couldn't be the way your touch
Exploads beneath my skin
Or the seductive way your voice grinds,
Rocky with adrenaline.

Could it be your thoughtful, wry smile
As if you know the key
That unlocks the tectonic plates
And exposes the earth beneath?

Is it the way my insides seem to lunge
Out for you when you laugh?
Head thrown back, mouth ajar,
The world seemingly inside your wrath?

Could it be the Devil's Tempt
That draws me nearer to you
Or is it all the missing reasons
That explain why I love you?

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-02-19 09:36 PM

KoKo
Probably all the missing reasons, enjoyed.

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Member Rara Avis

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In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2003-02-19 09:55 PM

Hugssss you LOVE YOUR NAME...

Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

3 posted 2003-02-19 10:33 PM

Lauren I loved it! I sometimes try to find the missing reasons...but can't

Beautiful work!

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2003-02-20 02:38 AM

Enjoyed it a lot

Charisma

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

5 posted 2003-02-20 03:15 AM

I can relate to this well....good write

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

6 posted 2003-02-21 08:40 PM

Hi KoKo,
Verey much enjoyed your poetry, hope to see more of your work.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

7 posted 2003-02-26 01:22 AM

Seymour: I agree, thank you

Lauren: LoL! Back at ya!!

Albert: Thank you for your kind words!

Charisma: Thank you (=
Passing shadows: Thanks ^_~
Cerenity: Thank you much!

s to all!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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