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Open Poetry #25

What I do on a boring day

Streen
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since 2001-11-28

Posts 169

0 posted 2003-02-25 06:57 PM

What I do on a boring day

It was a dark and deeply dismal day,
and I, yes -I-, had taken one brief class
in poetry of course! So on this day,
(and if should I repeat myself-- forgive)
when words and rhymes suppose to mix
themselves in fashions which do noble seem,
(but if my eye can see they do seem crass
for none ought think their forms do mine surpass,)
my teacher in a voice with drool and scheme,
remarked a work of mine was full of sticks
(as long as I still breathe I daren't relive
his other comments which I will not say.)
Ok, I will: my meter stinks, my tools are brass,
and all in all my work's (get this!) cliché!

[This message has been edited by Streen (02-25-2003 06:58 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-25 07:00 PM

LOL Sometimes I swear teachers stink. But of course not all teachers. I loved this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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