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Second Haiku Attempt
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Second Haiku Attempt |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Just because.... Beautiful raindrops Cleansing and giving rebirth Restoring the earth |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Susan, I didn't check to see if it is written 'properly'; regardless, I love the sentiment. Very well written in that matter. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
Very nicely done. I really liked this one. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I like this haiku!!!! Bridgette |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
raindrops.. many of us could use raindrops... nicely done... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
excellant piece! |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Just because... reason enough! |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
caressed by raindrops the old willow combs her hair and bows to the wind ________________________________________________ I look forward to reading more of your inspiring work. INclan [This message has been edited by INclan (02-25-2003 11:08 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good! |
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defenestrate Junior Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 46nc, us |
i like it. a simple, loving observation. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I love the rain! I love this too. good job Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That wasn't just an attempt at writing a haiku---it was a fait accomplis! (done deal!) Have a wonderful day! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, I like this haiku. These are fun to write, aren't they? Hugs, Ethel  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
give room for susan... Haiku master! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
OMG I know you have lost your mind!!! (kiss) you are my biggest fan, why, I don't know, but I will take it and run. Susan |
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