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Some voices (for Elan)
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Some voices (for Elan) |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Do not speak kind words to me or encourage climb to some level where I could not stand for long. Mostly fraud and afraid of heights, did I mention? Winters unforgiving ground is comfortable and I sleep well here, without the elegance of word or praise. Not all poets have something to say worth remembering past the moment. Some voices are better left to fade. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Do not speak kind words to me or encourage climb to some level where I could not stand for long. Mostly fraud and afraid of heights, did I mention? Winters unforgiving ground is comfortable and I sleep well here, without the elegance of word or praise. Not all poets have something to say worth remembering past the moment. ============================= OH BUT THE ONES THAT DO--SAY IT LIKE THIS!!! DUNCAN?????? OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS!!!!!!!  OOOOOUUUUU EEEEEEE OOOUUUUU AH AH TING TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG ....  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you know... this is great....but I do know when a poet has something to say..and says it well... you fit both |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Jams...I still think you're dipping into the Raspberry Boonesfarm today! Ron...Even saying nothing, is something!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Some words are meant to be forgotten and better to be revised, but every poet has something worth remembering as it reflects in echo! (big hugggsssss) This is well-said, sweet friend, Elan is bound to be touched by your sentiments, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Duncan!!! Note to JM...I remember that song!! ~Hugs & Friday Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some voices should never fade, Duncan, yours is one of them... Elan is going to be so pleased! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
SEE ... Nancy knows Im not nuts   I told the witch doctor I was in love with you... bumm bumm bumm bump .... and then the witch doctor he told me what to do... HE SAID.............................. OOOOOUUUUU EEEEEEE OOOUUUUU AH AH TING TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG .... OOOOOUUUUU EEEEEEE OOOUUUUU AH AH TING TANG WALLA WALLA BING BAAAAAAAAAAAAAANG ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Now submit this for the book vote or Ill keep singing !!! lmao |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thanks for encouraging her Nancy!!! No problem Jams, keep singing...I'm going out to lunch!!!  [This message has been edited by Duncan (02-21-2003 02:11 PM).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet, thank you, now that is STUCK in my head....  Cowboy, why isn't this one in for the book?! it SO should be!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I told the witch doctor I was in love with you... bumm bumm bumm bump .... and then the witch doctor he told me what to do... HE SAID.............................. OOOOOUUUUU EEEEEEE OOOUUUUU AH AH TING TANG WALLA WALLA BING BANG .... OOOOOUUUUU EEEEEEE OOOUUUUU AH AH TING TANG WALLA WALLA BING BAAAAAAAAAAAAAANG BOOK VOTE!!!!! dont make me get a moth posse |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
We'll see what Elan says...  !! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
how ya like my new sig lmao OOOOOUUUUU EEEEEEE OOOUUUUU AH AH |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Thank you Duncan, I will take another gross of poems... as good, or better, than this...  |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Well Duncan, I am not familiar with Elan, but... Some voices are better left to fade. not yours dear poet, not yours. Annie ever deep...runs |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You've been keepin love from me just like you were a miser and I'll admit I wasn't very smart. I'll go out and find myself a guy who's so much wiser, and he'll know how to love me from the start 'cause he'll say.... Yup, you are sure the romantic, but she kinda killed it don't ya think  ~* Carpe' Diem *~ [This message has been edited by Mysteria (02-23-2003 03:17 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the truth hurts,,,you speak truth well |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Some moths!  |
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