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ctowen
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0 posted 2003-03-11 09:21 PM



Drowning,
   in pools of blue
   bedrooms of dreams
      lost to you.

I seek ...
   only the true
   of heart, of mind,
      soul of you.

Reaching,
   to answer why's
   out of maybe's,
      blind to lie's.

Thinking,
   as the tear dries
   ... that's escaping ...
      from these eyes.

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-03-11 09:23 PM


Hi Craig...good to see your words.  Always
a joy...

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2 posted 2003-03-11 09:26 PM


quote:
I seek ...
   only the true
   of heart, of mind,
      soul of you.


I really enjoyed this part, It just sounded so nice, and powerful.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

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3 posted 2003-03-11 09:31 PM


Reaching....always reaching out, to see inside.
Softly written, Craig.

seven_conscious
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4 posted 2003-03-11 09:39 PM


always like pieces that are visually aesthetic as well as well written.  enjoyed...
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5 posted 2003-03-11 09:41 PM


I love how you weave words into a basket of thoughts and feelings. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

ctowen
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6 posted 2003-03-11 09:42 PM


Barry - always good to hear from you.

Connel - thank you.

KC - sometimes the reach is more difficult then the look inside, ... sometimes its the other way around.
Thank you for your many smiles.

ctowen
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7 posted 2003-03-11 09:46 PM


7 - thank you, glad to see you.

Chris - Basket weaving 101 ... got a B+,
happy to share my thoughts with you.

icequeen
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8 posted 2003-03-11 10:01 PM


bedrooms of dreams
      lost to you.



Stunning phrase.... an excellent work. I will be looking for more of your poetry

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-03-12 04:07 PM


drowning in pools of............ahhhhhh
turned my brown eyes blue..........

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10 posted 2003-03-12 04:33 PM


lost soul
    I seek .....
in the room of dreams


heart hugs....


ME~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

gemjop
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11 posted 2003-03-12 07:37 PM


Craig, do enjoy your writes, always from your heart.
xxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Silver_Tryst
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12 posted 2003-03-12 07:46 PM


Great write...intersting

Shayne

vandana
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13 posted 2003-03-12 09:14 PM


enjoyed
Lisann
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14 posted 2003-03-12 10:26 PM


very well written.
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15 posted 2003-03-12 11:44 PM




(sigh) Awwwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your wonderful words do! (big hugggssssss) May your dreams bleed into reality and always feel like home, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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