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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-03-20 10:07 PM



hurry spring,

winter's swan song
serenades the sleeping trees,
in awakening lullabies,

hurry spring,

coat the branches bare,
rain cries hard tonight,
weaves an intricate design,

hurry spring,

meloncholy sigh,
changing of the guard,
planting summer dreams,

hurry spring,

baring skin,
laughing toes, down the aisles,
stepping deep in dafodils,

hurry spring,

evening news, pressing views,
war hangs
the world with despair,

hurry spring,

soar my spirits,
slip me through
underneath the shadowed moon,

hurry spring,

deep in dreams,
surrendering to,
the heavenly view,
way beyond
the starry night.......

far away from here............

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-21-2003 06:10 PM).]

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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-03-20 10:12 PM


amen...
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-03-20 10:13 PM


Now I'm even more eager for spring to "hurry up" and get here!

Until spring does finally arrive, may I join you in wandering the starry sky beyond the moon?

Peace & Light,
EA

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
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3 posted 2003-03-20 10:53 PM


winter's swan song
serenades the sleeping trees,
in awakening lullabies,

This is just beautiful. I'm becoming a fan

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-03-20 11:26 PM


yes Michele - far far away from here indeed . . . .  xxoo
kayjay
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since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015
Oregon
5 posted 2003-03-21 12:59 PM


I, too, posted for Spring afore I noted yours, but I like yours too.  We cannot hope too hard for Spring to come.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
6 posted 2003-03-21 01:14 AM


baring skin,
laughing toes, down the aisles,
stepping deep in dafodils,
I love this part. Makes me think of dancing
in the dafodils with my Love......baring skin.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
7 posted 2003-03-21 03:33 PM


Were you on vacation...didnt see you write for a day or so. Hurry spring.....sure why not....whats the difference between spring and winter in florida.......the snow birds go home...yippee!!!! Not so crowded for the early bird specials and less Camrys driving in the right lane with the left turn signal on.....did i mention the golf rates go down.....hurry spring!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
8 posted 2003-03-21 06:09 PM


i was here, saw you were too,
send me more fla . oranges, and choc. kisses too

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
9 posted 2003-03-21 06:37 PM


My compliments ... this is very well done. Subtle and meaningful.
"Hurry Spring" ..... in the world and in our hearts!
Love, Margherita

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
10 posted 2003-03-21 07:53 PM


inkedgoddess - it arrived here this morning, must have been this poem that helped it come in... It's gorgeous here in the mountains...

BC

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
11 posted 2003-03-22 12:47 PM


You are the goddess of imagery
that transcends a single thought while saying so much.

I can't begin to pick and choose my favorite lines because I wouldn't want to leave one of them out.

Good job girlielocks~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (03-22-2003 01:35 PM).]

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