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Open Poetry #25

senyru that wrote itself

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2003-02-17 11:32 AM

being here with you
sends me into autumn while
others are in spring

©February 17, 2003

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-02-17 11:40 AM

VAS
Good one, very nice.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-02-17 11:46 AM

I hope that you are enjoying your autumn! That time of year in a relationship may not have the newness and exhillaration of one in its spring, but there cqn be a rich, mellow, and comforting quality to it.

Warm hugs,
EA

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

3 posted 2003-02-17 11:50 AM

Aaaah! Been there myself, in thought. Strong!

Rf

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

4 posted 2003-02-17 11:51 AM

If this wrote itself,
then your muse named Itself
should be with you
always...

it's perfect!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

5 posted 2003-02-17 11:51 AM

Thanks, you two, and EA, I have a confession...it's all fiction, the poem wrote itself, I'm in no relationship that makes me feel thus. I'm in no relationship other than the one with my Lord and my friends and none of them make me feel that way.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-02-17 12:39 PM

Excellent. ThisDiamond

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-02-17 12:50 PM

lol. Wouldnt change a word.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2003-02-24 11:53 AM

glad i scanned the back pages and came across this...good write!

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