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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-03-14 08:54 PM


”WHILE YOU WERE GONE”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I missed you deeply within when
we parted and you went your
way, and I went mine,
it seemed that
I lost all
thoughts of time…

I traveled all over the world
did things, saw many
sights, yet it wasn’t
enough to satisfy the
loneliness within…

I saw you in my dreams,
close, yet so far away,
memories were burned in
my mind, and I
reached out for you…

Then once again you were
there to embrace as before,
sharing whispered thoughts,
and my gentle words of how
I missed you
while you were gone…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-03-14 09:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Bill, this is sadly heartfelt, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright as I already miss my old sweetheart Joanna and we haven't talked in two months! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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2 posted 2003-03-15 07:16 AM


Beautiful thoughts...James
Elan
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State of Wide Eye
3 posted 2003-03-15 07:19 AM



It is amazing how well
whispers travel,
Sir...
like the air stirred
from a butterfly's
wing...

GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
4 posted 2003-03-15 10:23 AM


*sigh* this is sweet and painful.
Very beautiful, but it makes me sigh alot.
Enjoyed

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Connel
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5 posted 2003-03-15 10:39 AM


Everyone misses the people that they are
close to, when they leave. Its human nature.
Great write, I enjoyed.

Read ^ there, because you are reading the wrong part!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

6 posted 2003-03-15 10:51 AM


Beautiful!
Eric

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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7 posted 2003-03-15 01:33 PM


Goodness Bill - you always touch my heart so  . .  lovely  xxoo
catalinamoon
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8 posted 2003-03-15 02:55 PM


A happy ending, I love it.
Sandra

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