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Open Poetry #25

Controlled Chaos

Stolen Simplicity
Junior Member

since 2002-11-07

Posts 22
Canadian

0 posted 2003-03-13 07:13 PM

Controlled chaos,
I heard them say.
Is that what this is,
Amid the pain?

They hold control,
And yet we fall,
Wanting to hide,
To get away from the pain,
The pain that’s controlled.

And here I stand,
Alone and confused,
Where’s their control?
It disappeared with everything else,
But they forget,
And the chaos reigns.

The children cry,
The rest weep,
No one knows,
No one sees,
As the control slips,
By our feet.

The tears turn slowly,
Stone takes their place,
Time drifts mildly,
Unlike our fate.

And here we stand,
Looking around,
Wondering of the day,
They claimed they held,
Their controlled chaos.

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

1 posted 2003-03-13 07:41 PM

Good one.
And after the chaos,
what comes
but freedom,
who can feel the loss
of order, can appreciate
the beauty of peace.
Greeetings,
Etain

Stolen Simplicity
Junior Member

since 2002-11-07

Posts 22
Canadian

2 posted 2003-03-13 11:02 PM

Thanks for responding! It makes me feel all...warm and fuzzy inside. lol

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31