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INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 2003-02-16 04:36 PM

Dark are the drum beats
That harold "the dogs of war"
A great chasm waits

majnu

Senior Member

since 2002-10-13

Posts 1088
SF Bay Area

1 posted 2003-02-16 04:41 PM

more succint and to the point than this comment - excellent.

-majnu
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Timid thoughts be not afraid. I am a Poet.

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2003-02-19 10:22 AM

Hi INclan,

good to see something from you..this senryu is of course excellent as always..

reading this reminds me of how interested i was in haiku/senryu and how you have helped me along my way

feeling nostalgic here

hope life's well

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-02-20 04:31 AM

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-02-20 07:19 AM

Interesting...James

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

5 posted 2003-02-20 11:57 AM

Thank you all for stopping by. Yes, it is a little different from what I usually write. Special thanx to Majnu and Kaile, I try to pack my work with as much as possible. When I recieve comments like yours, I know I have been successful.

INclan

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2003-02-21 05:53 AM

Hey, INclan
a submission to Reflections perhaps? this is a senryu worth to be recorded down in print since it is reflective of current times

Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

7 posted 2003-02-21 09:46 AM

Yes, submit, and one change..."herald"...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-02-21 09:58 AM

Excellently executed! Foreboding...

Warm hugs,
EA

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2003-02-23 11:31 AM

hey, what say you?

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

10 posted 2003-02-24 01:00 PM

Ok, I yield. I will submit it to Reflections. Thank you for catching my spelling error. The editor will not let me correct it here. I will fix it in the submission.

Best Regards,

INclan

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