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sperarifraai
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since 2003-03-06
Posts 65
Ireland

0 posted 2003-03-06 09:01 PM


I want to be new, I don’t like change
I’m hating the retro, things improve with age
I want to start wars but times too delayed
I want to excel but my beds not made

The kids are riding skateboards
The adults wearing jumpers
The babies pushed in buggies
In shopping centres by their mothers

I want to collapse society
But still be home for tea
I want my mind to calm
But can’t help keep it this way

I want so much to change
But I don’t quite know what
Actually I only want one thing to change
And it’s something I haven’t got



Sperari

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2003-03-06 09:04 PM


enjoyed the poem...
but if you'd read the rules and guidelines there's a general limit of three poems a day..
that way you're assured we can read them all and take the time to give them the replies they need.
Posting too many at first is a common mistake for those new to the forums

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

sperarifraai
Member
since 2003-03-06
Posts 65
Ireland
2 posted 2003-03-06 09:18 PM


Sorry about that
I shall conform to those guidelines starting from my last posting which is the poem 'nothing',
Sorry again

Sperari

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