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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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gravity defied eye roll skyward drift cloud cover pierced stardust third eye itch floating sattelite vision seeing all seeing nothing slow pulsation and supernova rebirth if only for an hour or two.. [This message has been edited by Aenimal (03-12-2003 12:23 AM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
one can pick up on a natural rhythm with the poem laid out like this..and get a vision of one's constant search...but the 500, how does that relate? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehehehe - awesome job Raph - want to be there with ya lol - need a bit of dreamstate myself - as for the 500 - check your PDRS guys lol - always amazed - this is great - excellent description - as always xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pass me a hit, cool daddeo, the beat goes on,.............. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Raph, what kind of hit did you get to make you feel this way? I'm serious, because I honestly don't know. And if you didn't get a hit, this imagination (or remembrance) is amazing. You described how I feel right before the drugs take effect when I'm put to sleep under anesthesia for an operation. LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
maybe he had a hit of love last night, right ethel, s9ometimes its the nicest high of all oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh do you see the colors? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks everyone..500 as in 500mg or thereabouts. I'm on painkillers and lets just say the side effects are diviiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiine.. |
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