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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 2003-03-01 11:19 PM



"Cobblestone Walk"

Cluttered, and settled here,
amongst the dandelions.
Set deep in the groud,
a rigid path.
The one I walk but four times a day.

Slippery and cold beneath my feet,
that summer day.
The one they say,
ruined your day.
Which you will never repeat.

A cobblestone walk,
you took that day.
Distracted by a soaring hawk,
for which you had to pay.
The walk that broke your leg.


(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-03-01 11:26 PM


Oh my! Hope that leg is healing OK. But perhaps the fall was worth it, if your eyes feasted upon the flight of a hawk?
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
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2 posted 2003-03-01 11:46 PM


Um... I didn't break my leg... lol, I just wrote a poem on a promt I was given...about the word Cobblestone... Sorry!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

JP
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since 1999-05-25
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Loomis, CA
3 posted 2003-03-04 06:53 PM


Very nice indeed.

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-03-05 04:37 AM


nice one
Phantom Poet
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5 posted 2003-03-06 07:15 PM


nice write
>>phantom poet<<

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