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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2002-02-25 06:30 PM

Tender lips of stardust kissing my skin
bathing within the tides of my heart
gently shining like an evening star
golden kisses braiding hair from afar

Upon an eclipse of shadows bare
love is penned in the cosmos we share
celestial bodies whispering of love
velvet skies, touched by moonlights glove

Lost within hypnotic planets of your eyes
and silhouettes dancing within the moon
lost within your eyes of stardust blue
orbiting the love I have for you

You are my sunset drifting beyond night
I am your Venus, your star shining bright

"Mistakes are the portals of discovery."
-- James Joyce

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-25-2002 07:22 PM).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-02-25 06:32 PM

*sigh* Sensually romantic...I love it...**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-02-25 06:33 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous and shines with celestial beauty, sweet friend, may the star of your heart forever shimmer with true love and may you forever see the satellites spin in the heavens of eternal promise in his eyes! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is breathtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

3 posted 2002-02-25 07:53 PM

Oh Victoria what a joy to read your poetry. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2002-02-25 07:54 PM

This is sensually beautiful and I have always loved your style and how cleverly you use metaphors

It's a keeper!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

5 posted 2002-02-25 07:58 PM

I love your use of space and the night sky to add power to you verses....wonderful ...passionate poem!!!!

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brianbeaudry
Member

since 2001-07-20

Posts 410
Northern Ontario Canada

6 posted 2002-02-25 07:58 PM

I love your use of space and the night sky to add power to you verses....wonderful ...passionate poem!!!!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2002-02-25 09:13 PM

Vic...you write this so exceptionally well...
I hope your husband enjoys it too....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2002-02-25 09:24 PM

Lovely Victoria! Enjoyed so much! Beautiful images created for my mind

~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2002-02-25 11:44 PM

thank you karen..happy you enjoyed hon hugs

noah

floria..thank you dear one hugss

melissa..so glad you enjoyed hugss

brian..thank you for peeking in

barry..my husband doesnt read my poetry..
unless i stick it under his nose ha..which
i dont...so nice to hear from you

nancy..thank you nancy...nice to hear from you
tonight hugss

[This message has been edited by Victoria (02-26-2002 08:14 AM).]

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