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No Score (senryu)
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No Score (senryu) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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No Score didn’t love you less could I have loved you anymore I didn’t keep score "Pour yourself thick, when it is you, that you spread." |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
now in overtime i find our love flourish we both know the score   (sigh) This is a powerfully touching poem, sweet friend, I hope this isn't a current feeling and now you have found comfort and certainty in love! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a fabulous senryu! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I like your senryu very much! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like this poem. The tightness makes the voice more effective. Nan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you did not keep score hitting the bull's eye instead archer turning pro |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I like this, presentation and message. Very good. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Perfectly true...who keeps score when it comes to love...there is never points being made....magnificent...I love it...**big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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