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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2002-02-24 07:42 AM

Little bitty squirrel
Dancing across the wire,
His tail in a curl.

Big black bird perching,
On the tall telephone pole
For breakfast searching.

Puppy dog at sleep
Seems strangely comfortable,
Halfway in the street.

Kitty cat strolling
Across the six foot high fence,
Sunrise patrolling.
Gloom

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2002-02-24 07:52 AM

Gloom,
I like the sunrise patrols - very classy.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2002-02-24 09:27 AM

I like the visions outside this window.
Peaches

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2002-02-24 09:42 AM

Thanks for the view from your window...curiously similar to mine, but then, aren't all open windows open upon souls?

thank you for this, Professor...

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

4 posted 2002-02-24 10:13 AM

OIC Here it is... I like this very much..

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2002-02-24 12:34 PM

Professor

I think the sun must be shinning on this day you see..as your poem warmed me.

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

6 posted 2002-02-24 04:49 PM

Gloom! You are amazing. My day is now brighter because you are there!

((Gloom))
-newell

Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com

Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

7 posted 2002-02-24 08:09 PM

Thank you, Kethry,
The cat in question, also patrols at night,
But this was the morning so, that’s when he got pegged.
I’m pleased you liked.

Thank you, peaches73533,
I left out a few things in the view,
like the heap of trash across the alley,
but I wasn’t looking that way this time.
Consider this a very edited view.

Thank you, Sunshine,
Windows of the soul always have interesting views
Glad you liked this one.

Thank you, Zinsser,
Two becomes four, as you look and see more,
Glad you found these pleasing.

Thank you, Martie,
It has been a warm winter here,
My daffy-dills are trying to bloom under that same window,
But I do believe the sun was shining today
I seldom pay it much attention.

Thank you, Silver Streak,
If brightness is what you wish
And my meager words give you some
Who am I to argue,
Pleased you enjoyed.

Gloom

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