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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-02-22 08:14 PM



Life Cycle


free flowing
over rock
stream to river
where salmon stop
to leave their seed
then pass away
for new generation
to continue life
only to
return someday


Connie McDonald
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Feb 22, 2002

© Copyright 2002 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-02-22 08:42 PM



Makes one glad we have parents...

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2 posted 2002-02-22 09:08 PM




WOW!!! Ooohhhhhh...this is soooooo well-said, sweet friend, you describe the circle of life so wonderfully! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2002-02-22 10:50 PM


Connie, such nice thoughts here, love it. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

Zinsser
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4 posted 2002-02-23 10:20 AM


Thanks everyone..... this is kind of a 2 tone poem.... one meaning... just the words you read..... the other our own children and how they repeat our patterns even when taught a diff life.... just reflecting
Ariana
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5 posted 2002-02-28 11:31 AM


Connie
It is ovious that you are not just talking about salmon but life.  Nicely done.

Zinsser
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6 posted 2002-02-28 04:05 PM


Ariana.... Thanks very much
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