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monique
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0 posted 2002-02-16 09:36 AM


the day after valentine
i dance too much
but not enough

the day after valentine
i ate too much
chocolat

the day after valentine
i feel lucky
to be loved

the day after valentine
i am going back to bed
for having too much fun
the night before


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1 posted 2002-02-16 10:02 AM



You too?


Except...it's TWO days after...

where WERE you?

Ah...you don't have to answer that!

Startime
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2 posted 2002-02-16 10:07 AM


*giggling* sounds like you had a wonderful time....**big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

kaile
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3 posted 2002-02-16 12:01 PM


so how was your nap?

anyway, if you would forgive me for being curious, so what did you exactly do on Valentine's day??

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4 posted 2002-02-16 12:57 PM




(smiles) Ooohhhhhhhh...this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I hope you had the happiest and loveliest Valentines Day ever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is gorgeous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Monique, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-02-16 01:16 PM


And the day after Valentine all that chocolate is half price...James
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-02-16 01:19 PM


Monique,
Sounds right to me, enjoyed

serenity blaze
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7 posted 2002-02-16 01:31 PM


Now, this didn't have anything to do with Valentine's Day falling on the same week as Carnival, would it?

It was a very decadent week here in N'awlins!
Hugs, monique!

Zinsser
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8 posted 2002-02-16 01:37 PM


LOL   I love it...... I am so tired today it's not funny... I can't even think.... My tribute to V-Day will have to wait a few days...
Bill Charles
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9 posted 2002-02-16 02:29 PM


monique - oh the day after, my head is pounding. Cute poem...

BC

monique
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10 posted 2002-02-16 06:13 PM


Sunshine, i wanted to send it last night but my morning nap was not enough i went to bed early.

Startime, Faterider i like your name, i went out dancing, i used to be able to stay out late but this last year my getting older body cannot take those late night out.

James, my husband bought me a funny valentine card with a big chocolate bar, i will wait for Easter for the next cocoa binge, well if i can wait that long.

Nope, Serenity, i watched the parade on tv,
i saved the good time for thursday night
blues jam session in Baton Rouge.

Seymour, i am glad you enjoyed it.

Zinsser and BC, Oh! Oh!

Noah, kiss on the cheek back to you, i did have a great day, thank you.

[This message has been edited by monique (02-16-2002 06:15 PM).]

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