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Krissy
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since 2002-02-22
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kent England

0 posted 2002-03-04 08:35 AM


Your Writing

You touched me
The words you wrote
Reached inside
Deep within
I felt them
Flowing
In a stream of
Light
Moving into
That core of being
That lies
Beneath layers
Of self

You stroked my soul
Those words of you
Flew into me
I breathed them in
Inhaled them
As I would
Air
Oxygen for the soul
Reviving rain
Drenching my
Inner being

You caressed my spirit
The words written here
Left the page
Entered me
Liquid crystal
Enlightened
Bathed my spirit
With wonder
Sighing through
My soul
Touching
That which is me

Krissy


My 100 post thank you for making my trip to 100 so easy, and so pleasant



And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

© Copyright 2002 Krissy P J Searle - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2002-03-04 08:40 AM


Thank you for being here with us, Krissy

You make this a better place for all of us... What wonderful words you pen here..

Happy 100th...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2002-03-04 08:40 AM


Krissy,
Congrats and thank you for the delightful poem.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-03-04 08:43 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, you all touch our hearts always with your beautiful words, sweet friend, your writing is always excellent and we're all soooooo delighted you're here with us all! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, CONGRATULATIONS ON 100, WE'RE ALL SOOOOOO PROUD OF YOU!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krissy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2002-03-04 08:57 AM


You caressed my spirit
The words written here
Left the page
Entered me
Liquid crystal
Enlightened
Bathed my spirit
With wonder
Sighing through
My soul
Touching
That which is me
===============================

yes...that happens a lot here...
100 already!! ... better pace yourself, wouldnt want you to become a moth like me.
congrats and this is a lovely tribute to poetry.

So it seems your saving grace was only saving face,
you thought he was wanting you...
but he was only wanting you to let him off the hook.

~BNL~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2002-03-04 09:00 AM


This is beautiful Krissy!
Boy didn't that first 100 go fast?!
Congratulations on your milestone!
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-03-04 09:01 AM



To join the wing of Moth in Light
and bubble like your mother Bright
to sing along in poetry
is to write like this, you see...

for a poet you are in heart, and mind...
come along...for in here you'll find
this is the home where you'd rather be
when it comes to poetry!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2002-03-04 09:53 AM


such a sweet write..congratulations on your first 100 and may there be many more.

hugs
M

Cpat Hair
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8 posted 2002-03-04 09:59 AM


You touched me
The words you wrote
Reached inside
Deep within
I felt them
Flowing
In a stream of
Light
Moving into
That core of being
That lies
Beneath layers
Of self
yes this has happened to me alot here... touched in ways deeper than the mere words would suggest....

nicely done!

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
9 posted 2002-03-04 10:06 AM


The words written here
Left the page
Entered me
Liquid crystal
Enlightened
Bathed my spirit
With wonder

This is all about feeling, what a splendid write....very touching Krissy~


Lauren~

Greeneyes~

Step through the
barrier of my mind,
enter my soul,
feel my desire,
let my eyes guide you
into the shadows
of my heart

Martie
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10 posted 2002-03-04 10:22 AM


Krissy

I understand this feeling so much.  So glad you are here to write them!

strbbux
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Posts 3859

11 posted 2002-03-04 10:26 AM


Krissy you are such an addition to this forum.. I love these lines.

"Liquid crystal
Enlightened
Bathed my spirit
With wonder"

Beautifully done, and we love you too Krissy. floria

Floria

"Alas for those that never sing,
But die with all their music in them"
(Oliver Wendell Holmes)

catalinamoon
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12 posted 2002-03-04 10:36 AM


Thank you for all 100 of them, Krissy.
This is a beauty. Words have so much power, don't they.
Sandra

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13 posted 2002-03-04 04:21 PM


SweetKrissy~

'You touched me
The words you wrote
Reached inside
Deep within
I felt them
Flowing
In a stream of
Light
Moving into
That core of being
That lies
Beneath layers
Of self

You stroked my soul
Those words of you
Flew into me
I breathed them in
Inhaled them
As I would
Air
Oxygen for the soul
Reviving rain
Drenching my
Inner being'


When the inkwell of a poet contains fluid thoughts ... it is a blessing to have them released upon the pages blue to inspire and refresh the soul~

You know why I treasure the beauty of this piece ...
My spirit is comforted in these remembering-days by the gentle caress of you~
Thank you ... I love you gal~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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